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Welcome to the headquarters of theVeil Universe, a unique blend of role-playing and world-building. Join in, pick a side, and engage in one of the most unique fictional universes in existence! Now is a time of creation, exploration, and battle. Come join in the formation of entirely new aliens, factions, and technology!

For our returning veterans who prefer the PCG as imagined in the LUCL, it's still here.

Oh, and before to go― please, grab a sidearm. It gets a bit crazy around here...
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Talmid
Talmid
Commander (PCG)
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Join date : 2013-07-12
Faction : United Federation of Planets
Posts : 838
Location : Earth

USS Talmidon IV Empty USS Talmidon IV

Wed Jul 09, 2014 12:26 am


Simply put, I have completed the USS Talmidon IV.  The new ship is sleeker and more graceful than the outgoing 'III Refit, with the most noticeable change existing in the form of what I like to call Kewl Wingz.

As in, the Talmidon IV's wing supports which also serve as nacelle pylons now slope upwards.  In words this feature might seem pretty basic and boring but it actually gives the Talmidon a fresh, new look than the previous three generations didn't have.

Either way there were still more changes to be done, such as recoloring some stuff, redoing the saucer detail, adding and removing some extraneous weapons systems, and overall making the new Talmidon new.  It's not another refit of the Talmidon III - the IV really is a new ship.

And a fine ship it is.

Its official "canon" debut will most likely be an appearance in my Talmid Show animations.  How this comes to happen and under what circumstances are secrets, but all will be revealed.

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PXR
PXR
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Join date : 2014-06-24
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Posts : 588
Location : Out of the frying pan and into the fire

USS Talmidon IV Empty Re: USS Talmidon IV

Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:31 am
It looks great! I really like the "slanting upward" nacelles. I can't find any flaws on it, Razz and I like the new look. But the first pic isn't loading for me for some reason. Neutral I'm not sure if it's just me. Razz
Dino27
Dino27
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Join date : 2013-05-20
Faction : Phoenix Command Group
Posts : 1435
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USS Talmidon IV Empty Re: USS Talmidon IV

Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:58 am
It's not just you Mirage.

Agreed on the upswept pylons... I was actually considering doing that (and seeing how well it works... I think I will) on my alt Talmidon design.


I like the new look. Very aesthetically pleasing. Nice job Talmid! Very Happy
PXR
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USS Talmidon IV Empty Re: USS Talmidon IV

Wed Jul 09, 2014 7:37 am
@Dino: Nvm, I'm using my laptop now, and it's a video. Razz
Talmid
Talmid
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USS Talmidon IV Empty Re: USS Talmidon IV

Wed Jul 09, 2014 11:05 am
Thanks guys, and I'm glad everything works now for you Mirage. Smile
Tetrahedron
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Faction : Phoenix Command Group
Posts : 1012
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USS Talmidon IV Empty Re: USS Talmidon IV

Wed Jul 09, 2014 1:43 pm
Well... the Talmidion's looking better than I remembered. Razz In all seriousness though, this is one epic-looking refit! The pylon-things are very well done, loving the upward slope.

Keep it up. Razz
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